Personal recount

Chinese New Year is around the corner. And there won't be school for a few days which means... Homework! Of course there is homework for every school days. Well the only thing I can do is to finish my homework fast and be free.

After I did all my homework the first thing I did is go out and hang out with my friends. We wanted to watch a movie so we went to a movie treatre. We thought the movie theatre will be packed but when we reached there and guess what, it was not as crowded then we imagined. After we watched the movie we went window shopping for a while. After that we went back home.

The next day, my friends and I went out together again. But this time we went to ice skating. It was the first time for most of my friends, so one of my friend and I had to teach them. 1 hour later most of us learned ice skating. To say the truth I think ice skating is easier to learn then roller blading. After that we went to have lunch all of us wanted to eat different things so we split up and ate lunch and met at a place after that. After lunch of course it was time to go home and we were all tired after spending the whole day outside.

Little India Riot Draft 2

Name: Lum JiaHui
Class:1E1
Draft 2: Introduction/Conclusion

Dear Tom,

Hey Tom, how was school in America. Mom and dad miss you ,but of course I will not miss my annoying brother. Haha I was just joking, I miss you like mom and dad does. Oh by the way guess what? An incident happened in singapore. You will not believe what happened here. A riot happened in little india. And this is what happened. On the Dec 8 a private bus ran over a indian man whose name is sakthival kumaravelu,33. And Then After The riot happened.

I think it was a unnecessary riot. Why can't they just mind their own business. I feel angry as these things could have been prevented but they choose to do this. I feel the police came on time. And this is sometimes why police have to step in because some people just do foolish things. Okay I will stop talking if not i will get more angry.

Oh by the way how's Dad is he fine there? Write back to me of how you feel and you can search it up on the internet to find out more.Study well and take care of dad. I and mom will be visiting you during the june holidays.Bye!

Love, Jiahui

Movie Review: Frozen

Title: Frozen

Describe the most exciting/memorable part of the movie. Why do you like it?

Anna sets off on an epic jouney, teaming up with rugged mountainman ,krisoff, and his royal reindeer ,sven, to find her sister ,Elsa, whose icy powers have trapped the kingdom of arendelle.

If you could rewrite one part of the movie, which part would it be and why? How would you like to rewrite it?

I would want to make elsa tell why she did not want to come out, instead of not telling her. Or when anna wanted to bring elsa back she could have told her why she avoided anna.

List 3 Leasons that you have picked up from watching the movie.

1) It does not always have to be a boy to be the hero

2) Love for your family is the strongest

3) Never marry someone you just met.

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Struggles And How I Overcame Them Draft3 Final product

Name: Lum JiaHui

Class:1E1

Draft 3: Editing errors

Struggles And How I Overcame Them

Everyone has definately been through a major examination and had stress. And if you have stress when a major examination is around the corner, it is not a good thing. As stress can cause us to forget what we learnt. And so this is my story of how I overcame my struggles.But I did not overcome it myself. I had help. So let us begin my journey.

When I was in primary 3 Math was not my favorite subject at all as I struggled to understand it and I did not know what to do. I usually get just pass or fail, this continued until primary 6. 

I had a new math teacher whose name is Mdm Chan. Mdm Chan taught us math and her goal for us to get for any test is Section A:18 Section B:18 Paper 2: 18. And my class had only 3 passes who just passed. Months gone by and the class started to have more passes for tests, And Mdm Chan asked "This class had only 3 passes now there are more passes,  and there are some people who even got As for math. Now can you see the light?" My class nodded in happiness. Mdm Chan gave us test often and gave us just enough homework so that all of us can complete all the homework. She usually ask us what homework we have for other subjects and give us just enough. And I revised whatever Mdm Chan gave us to do.

After Prelim all of us passed and most of us got Bs, As and very little Cs, and that helped us a lot as that showed us hope. And we continued to do what Mdm Chan said and when PSLE was around the corner all of us were nervous. Mdm Chan then said "Those who did my work and listened, you do not need to be nervous I gave you all enough homework and all of you had enough revision. All of you will pass PSLE." 

And thats when I felt excited to finish PSLE and be free. So thats how I overcame my struggle. This may not be how I overcame it but this is how my teacher helped me see the light. And when I got stressed out I will remember remind myself that I am prepared for this.

Struggles And How I OverCame Them Draft 2

Name: Lum JiaHui

Class:1E1

Draft 2 : Introduction/conclusion

Struggles And How I Overcame Them

Everyone has definately been through a major examination and had stress. And if you have stress when a major examination is around the corner, it is not a good thing. As stress can cause us to forget what we learnt. And so this is my story of how I overcame my struggles.But I did not overcome it myself. I had help. So let us begin my journey.

Primary 3 Math was not my favorite subject at all as I struggled to understand it and I did not know what to do. I usually get just pass or fail, this continued until primary 6. 

I had a new math teacher whose name is mdm Chan. Mdm Chan taught us math and her goal for us to get for any test is Section A:18 Section B:18 Paper 2: 18. And my class had only 3 passes who just passed. Months gone by and the class started to have more passes for tests, And Mdm Chan asked "This class had only 3 passes now most passed and there are some people who even got As for math. Now can you see the light?" My class nodded in happiness. Mdm Chan gave us test often and gave us just enough homework so that all of us can complete all the homework. She usually see what homework we have for other subjects and give us just enough. And I revised whatever Mdm Chan gave us to do.

After Prelim all of us passed and most of us got Bs, As and very little Cs, and that helped us a lot as that showed us hope. And we continued to do what Mdm Chan said and when PSLE was around the corner all of us were nervous. Mdm Chan then said "Those who did my work and listened, you do not need to be nervous I gave you all enough homework and all of you had enough revision. All of you will pass PSLE." 

And thats when I felt excited to finish PSLE and be free. So thats how I overcame my struggle. This may not be how I overcame it but this is how my teacher helped me see the light. And when I got stressed out I will remember remind myself that I am prepared for this.

Little india riot Draft 1

Name: Lum JiaHui
Class:1E1
Draft 1:Content

Dear Tom,

Hey Tom, how was school in America.An incident happened in singapore. A riot happened in little india. And this is what happened. On the Dec 8 a private bus ran over a indian man whose name is sakthival kumaravelu,33. And Then After The riot happened.

I think it was a unnecessary riot. Why can't they just mind their own business. I feel angry as these things could have been prevented but they choose to do this. I feel the police came on time. And this is sometimes why police have to step in because some people just do foolish things. Okay I will stop talking if not i will get more angry.

Oh by the way how's Dad is he fine there? Write back to me of how you feel and you can search it up on the internet to find out more. So thats it, that is all i want to say bro bye.

Love, Jiahui

The Story Of My File Draft 3/ Final Product

Name: Lum Jia Hui

Class:1E1

Draft 3: Error Edting

The Story Of My File

"This file seems familiar" Said Tom.
"Remember the file I bought 3 years ago?" I Said.
"Yes I do, hold on! This is the file you bought 3 years ago?" Said Tom.
"Yes I am still using it now" I Said.

I Reuse it as it is still clean and useable. My trusty file kept my homework nice and clean without any bends at the corner. I kept all my homework in one slot. Sometimes when I see someone have a crumpled paper I asked myself if they have a trusty file like I do.

Few days later, I met Tom at a book shop. He saw me and asked me why I bought another file. I told him that my file was not in good condition, as the slots of the file tore. And of course most of the time we will throw the file, and i did the same. I'm happy that my file served me for 3 years

In school teacher gave out files that were used and still new, just then I relized that we should keep the files even if it is not in use currently and it might be useful next time.

THE END

The Story of the file Draft 2

Name: Lum Jia Hui

Class:1E1

Draft 2: Introdution/Conclusion 

The Story Of My File

"This file seems familiar" Said Tom.
"Remember the file I bought 3 years ago?" I Said.
"Yes I do, hold on! This is the file you bought 3 years ago?" Said Tom.
"Yes I am still using it now" I Said.

I Reuse it as it is still clean and useable. My trusty file kept my homework nice and clean without any bends at the corner. I kept all my homework in one slot. Sometimes when I see someone have a crumpled paper I asked myself if they have a trusty file like I do.

Few days later, I met Tom at a book shop. He saw me and asked me why I bought another file. I told him that my file was not in good condition, as the slots of the file tore. And of course most of the time we will throw the file, and i did the same. I'm happy that my file served me for 3 years

In school teacher gave out files that were used and still new, just then i relized that we should keep the files even if it is not in use currently and it might be useful next time.

THE END

JiaHui's Autobiography Final product

Name: Lum Jia Hui

Class:1E1

Auto Biography

I never expected to be as happy or maybe a little bit sad as This is a start of a new life and before I move on to my life I want to do a auto biography. My name is Lum Jia Hui. I'm from 1E1 also known as perseverance 1 from CBSS. My hobbies are listening to music, biking and playing minecraft. I love to build things in minecraft and it takes alot of time and work but it's fun. I usually go biking with my friend and we usually go long distances. And i prefer English musics. 

My favorite colour is Purple. I don't really have a favorite food actually. Something interesting about me is that I like to capitalize the first letter of every word, an example, Hi My Name Is Jiahui. 

About myself I like teakwondo because when I was Primary 2 my parents asked me if I wanted to join and I said I would give it a shot. On the first day I joined and learn some basics of Teakwondo, and I liked it. Teakwondo taught me a lot of things, I also learned values like perseverance and endurance. And here are some pictures of my competition. 

My best friends in my primary school are Tze Yung, WenMin, JiaJie And Rachel. Life in primary school was fun especially after PSLE, My classmates and I went to the park and played Running Man. We also went to JurongEast JCube to ice skate. We also went to Yishun Safra and play bowling. And we went to Sembawang park recently and played there.

My favorite subject is science because I want to become a doctor. I like anything related to science. My expectation for secondary school is having more opportunity to enter competitions.Usually I dont have much opportunity to enter a competition and it wiil be great if there is.

Thank you for reading my blog! :)

Biography Of Someone

Biography Of Someone

Hello and now I am going to tell you about my friend tze yung. She a great friend of mine. Primary 5 she came to the playground near my house and I saw her from my window. 

She was playing with her friends at the playground. And that usually happens everyday she comes at around 1:30 and leaves at 2:30 because her parents will ask her where she went and she was not suppose to go to the playground. And thats what people say strict parents may create sneaky children.

There was this particular day when she was playing blind mice she was on the ground and walking around the playground. And this incident happened she was under a stair and she hit her head on it and she bled above her eyebrow. I went down and checked to see is she was okay, and she did she bled a bit of blood and nothing serious. When I checked why she bled I saw a carving which had sharp edges and that is why she bled.

THE END.

Struggle And How I Overcame Them Draft 1

Name: Lum JiaHui

Class:1E1

Draft 1: Content 

Struggles And How I OverCame Them

Primary 3 Math was not my favorite subject at all as I struggled to understand it and I did not know what to do. I usually get just pass or fail, this continued until primary 6. 

I had a new math teacher whose name is mdm Chan. Mdm Chan taught us math and her goal for us to get for any test is Section A:18 Section B:18 Paper 2: 18. And my class had only 3 passes who just passed. Months gone by and the class started to have more passes for tests, And Mdm Chan asked "This class had only 3 passes now most passed and there are some people who even got As for math. Now can you see the light?" My class nodded in happiness. Mdm Chan gave us test often and gave us just enough homework so that all of us can complete all the homework. She usually see what homework we have for other subjects and give us just enough. And I revised whatever Mdm Chan gave us to do.

After Prelim all of us passed and most of us got Bs, As and very little Cs, and that helped us a lot as that showed us hope. And we continued to do what Mdm Chan said and when PSLE was around the corner all of us were nervous. Mdm Chan then said "Those who did my work and listened, you do not need to be nervous I gave you all enough homework and all of you had enough revision. All of you will pass PSLE." 

And thats when I felt excited to finish PSLE and be free. So thats how I overcame my struggle. This may not be how I overcame it but this is how my teacher helped me see the light.

The Story Of My File Draft 1

Name: Lum Jia Hui

Class:1E1

Draft 1

The Story Of My File

I bought a file 3 years ago, and I am still useing it now. I Reuse it as it is still clean and useable. My trusty file kept my homework nice and clean without any bends at the corner. I kept all my homework in one slot. Sometimes when I see a crumpled paper I asked myself if they have a trusty file.

My file served me well and it was time for it to say goodbye as the folders broke and of course most of the time we will throw the file, and i did the same. I'm happy that my file served me for 3 years

And of course I had to buy a new file, and I did. In school teacher gave out files that were used and still new, just then i relized that we should keep the files even if it is not in use currently and it might be useful next time.

THE END