CT English corrections

CT corrections
Editing: Contractions

Block 552
Ang Mo Kio Avenue 10
#02-544

30 May 2014

Dear Sally
 
How are you? I was glad to hear from you. In this letter I will tell you anout my plans for the school holidays in june since you want to know them. I enjoyed reading your letter about your plans. Hope you'll have fun.

Last night, when I was about to take the lift. I saw this brochure about some activities which are being organised during the school holidays. I have picked two activities from the brochure which I am interested in. I also plan to sign up for an activity which is not on the brochure.

The first activity I choose from the brochure is Relax with kids'Yoga. This activity is suitable for me as I'm tired from lessons and it can help me relax. The class includes storytelling and music and is led by instructors who will lead participants to regain your vitality and peace. One thing I like about this is that Yoga will help me relax and rejuvenate my mind, body and spirt. Doesn't that sound interesting? The lesson is on 9-11 June or 16- 18 June. It starts at 9:00 am and ends at 12:00 pm (x3 days). The fee is expensive but worth it. It is $120 per participant.

The next activity I want to participate is Ang Mo Kio Soccer Club Holiday programme. I want to participate in this becuase as you know I am the sporty type of person and I want to blow off some steam. I can pick up soccer skills as well as enjoy team building challenges. I wish you could join this activity with me. It's on wednesday evenings (4th, 11th, 18th, 25th June). For girls the time for the activity will be 4:30pm - 5:30pm. It is held at the Ang Mo Kio Soccer Stadium. It's free!

Now it is time for the last activity that I want to tell you about. It's ice hockey. You know how much I like watching Ice hockey. Now, I can learn and play ice hockey. How cool is that? It is held during the school holidays. The fee is expensive; it is $200. It is quite cheap as it is for three lessons per week and four weeks mean twelve lessons for $200. That's  cheaper than normal lessons.

That's it for my plans for school holidays. Hope you would come back to singapore from America to join me. Remember to write to me when you are free. Have a nice holiday.

Cheers
Jiahui

English Reflection

English Reflection

Common test is over and I think I could have done better in my English common test. English is not my best subject, I know that, I will practise more and revise more. I think my English teachers have taught me well, now it is all up to me to work hard. English lessons are fun. Ms Foo taught my class the importance of speaking good English. I agree with Ms Foo why is it important. I like staying back after school to do school work. I do not know why I like it but I do. 

I could have done better for all my subjects if I had put in more hard work. Regret not putting more effort. Anyways the past is the past I cannot change it.