JiaHui

Sunday, 30 March 2014

CT English corrections

CT corrections
Editing: Contractions

Block 552
Ang Mo Kio Avenue 10
#02-544

30 May 2014

Dear Sally

How are you? I was glad to hear from you. In this letter I will tell you anout my plans for the school holidays in june since you want to know them. I enjoyed reading your letter about your plans. Hope you'll have fun.

Last night, when I was about to take the lift. I saw this brochure about some activities which are being organised during the school holidays. I have picked two activities from the brochure which I am interested in. I also plan to sign up for an activity which is not on the brochure.

The first activity I choose from the brochure is Relax with kids'Yoga. This activity is suitable for me as I'm tired from lessons and it can help me relax. The class includes storytelling and music and is led by instructors who will lead participants to regain your vitality and peace. One thing I like about this is that Yoga will help me relax and rejuvenate my mind, body and spirt. Doesn't that sound interesting? The lesson is on 9-11 June or 16- 18 June. It starts at 9:00 am and ends at 12:00 pm (x3 days). The fee is expensive but worth it. It is $120 per participant.

The next activity I want to participate is Ang Mo Kio Soccer Club Holiday programme. I want to participate in this becuase as you know I am the sporty type of person and I want to blow off some steam. I can pick up soccer skills as well as enjoy team building challenges. I wish you could join this activity with me. It's on wednesday evenings (4th, 11th, 18th, 25th June). For girls the time for the activity will be 4:30pm - 5:30pm. It is held at the Ang Mo Kio Soccer Stadium. It's free!

Now it is time for the last activity that I want to tell you about. It's ice hockey. You know how much I like watching Ice hockey. Now, I can learn and play ice hockey. How cool is that? It is held during the school holidays. The fee is expensive; it is $200. It is quite cheap as it is for three lessons per week and four weeks mean twelve lessons for $200. That's cheaper than normal lessons.

That's it for my plans for school holidays. Hope you would come back to singapore from America to join me. Remember to write to me when you are free. Have a nice holiday.

Cheers
Jiahui

Friday, 14 March 2014

English Reflection

Common test is over and I think I could have done better in my English common test. English is not my best subject, I know that, I will practise more and revise more. I think my English teachers have taught me well, now it is all up to me to work hard. English lessons are fun. Ms Foo taught my class the importance of speaking good English. I agree with Ms Foo why is it important. I like staying back after school to do school work. I do not know why I like it but I do.

I could have done better for all my subjects if I had put in more hard work. Regret not putting more effort. Anyways the past is the past I cannot change it.

Monday, 27 January 2014

Personal recount

Chinese New Year is around the corner. And there won't be school for a few days which means... Homework! Of course there is homework for every school days. Well the only thing I can do is to finish my homework fast and be free.

After I did all my homework the first thing I did is go out and hang out with my friends. We wanted to watch a movie so we went to a movie treatre. We thought the movie theatre will be packed but when we reached there and guess what, it was not as crowded then we imagined. After we watched the movie we went window shopping for a while. After that we went back home.

The next day, my friends and I went out together again. But this time we went to ice skating. It was the first time for most of my friends, so one of my friend and I had to teach them. 1 hour later most of us learned ice skating. To say the truth I think ice skating is easier to learn then roller blading. After that we went to have lunch all of us wanted to eat different things so we split up and ate lunch and met at a place after that. After lunch of course it was time to go home and we were all tired after spending the whole day outside.

Little India Riot Draft 2

Name: Lum JiaHui
Class:1E1
Draft 2: Introduction/Conclusion

Dear Tom,

Hey Tom, how was school in America. Mom and dad miss you ,but of course I will not miss my annoying brother. Haha I was just joking, I miss you like mom and dad does. Oh by the way guess what? An incident happened in singapore. You will not believe what happened here. A riot happened in little india. And this is what happened. On the Dec 8 a private bus ran over a indian man whose name is sakthival kumaravelu,33. And Then After The riot happened.

I think it was a unnecessary riot. Why can't they just mind their own business. I feel angry as these things could have been prevented but they choose to do this. I feel the police came on time. And this is sometimes why police have to step in because some people just do foolish things. Okay I will stop talking if not i will get more angry.

Oh by the way how's Dad is he fine there? Write back to me of how you feel and you can search it up on the internet to find out more.Study well and take care of dad. I and mom will be visiting you during the june holidays.Bye!

Love, Jiahui

Movie Review: Frozen

Title: Frozen

Describe the most exciting/memorable part of the movie. Why do you like it?

Anna sets off on an epic jouney, teaming up with rugged mountainman ,krisoff, and his royal reindeer ,sven, to find her sister ,Elsa, whose icy powers have trapped the kingdom of arendelle.

If you could rewrite one part of the movie, which part would it be and why? How would you like to rewrite it?

I would want to make elsa tell why she did not want to come out, instead of not telling her. Or when anna wanted to bring elsa back she could have told her why she avoided anna.

List 3 Leasons that you have picked up from watching the movie.

1) It does not always have to be a boy to be the hero

2) Love for your family is the strongest

3) Never marry someone you just met.